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Title: My Message
Author: [livejournal.com profile] soulmatejunkee 
Fandom: Queer as Folk US
POV: Jennifer
Timeline: Episode 5.08 - Gapfiller
Word Count: 200
Disclaimer: I don’t own anything. It’s all CowLip and Showtime.
Beta: No beta, all mistakes are mine!



This is just something I have in mind since... forever! Today I had a little time and I wrote i down. It's a Gapfiller for Episode 5.08, after Craig gets Justin arrested and tells him that it's his fault that they're not a family anymore. Here's Jennifers revenge...

As always, every comment is welcome!

Jennifer's POV

There’s nothing in my mind, nothing but hate. I can’t believe I once loved him, right now I hate him for so many things, but most of all for being who he is - someone I never thought he could be.

I don’t greet anyone when I storm into the building. I barely see anyone. There’s so much I want to say, but then, when I push open the door to his office and he’s there, sitting behind his desk as if nothing happened, it’s all gone.

"Jen," he says and looks at me.

So much hate for what he just did to my son, to our son. When did he become so cold, so unable or unwilling to see how much he hurts Justin with his words and actions?

I just look down on him and all I feel is pity. I don’t know that man anymore. He’s nothing to me. I lean forward on his desk to get closer to him and before even I realize what I do, I spit right in his face.

He’s shocked, he winces and looks surprised.

"What the...?! Jen!"

I still don’t say anything. I’m sure he got the message loud and clear.

on 2011-12-19 02:11 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] galehot.livejournal.com
I love that woman!!

Maybe he didn't say a word but, as Brian always says, "sometimes you don't need to"

I can see this scene in the serie. Thanks for give us this little revenge moment!!

Kisses

on 2011-12-19 09:29 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] soulmatejunkee.livejournal.com
Love that woman too :)
And I would've loved to see a scene like that, too. Craig's an asshole.

on 2011-12-19 02:21 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] santa-elidan.livejournal.com
*hugs Jennifer" You go girl!
You're sure he's Justin's father anyway?

on 2011-12-19 09:29 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] soulmatejunkee.livejournal.com
Unfortunately yes, I think so *LOL*
I doubt she cheated on him, especially not that early in their marriage :D

on 2011-12-19 02:54 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] ls1966.livejournal.com
Very powerfull, love that mom ;-)

on 2011-12-19 09:30 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] soulmatejunkee.livejournal.com
Me too, she's my fave mom on the show.

on 2011-12-19 03:10 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] aaa-mazing.livejournal.com
I guess the message's got;)
You go, Mother Taylor!
Liked it, hon!

on 2011-12-19 09:30 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] soulmatejunkee.livejournal.com
Thanks a lot :)

on 2011-12-19 05:18 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] guavejuice.livejournal.com
Very well said, and written, LS!!

on 2011-12-19 09:30 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] soulmatejunkee.livejournal.com
Thanks V.

on 2011-12-19 06:07 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
This is perfect. Gotta love Jen and her natural instincts. Her reaction to her ex-husband's cruelty is right on. Thanks for writing this. ♥

on 2011-12-19 09:31 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] soulmatejunkee.livejournal.com
Thank you :)
Happy to read that you liked it.

on 2011-12-19 08:42 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] rulisteningbj.livejournal.com
Jennifer's revenge is sweet. He certainly deserved more, but I am sure he got the point.

Dee Dee

on 2011-12-19 09:31 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] soulmatejunkee.livejournal.com
He deserved getting his balls cut off...
But lets start with the spitting *gg*

on 2011-12-19 09:00 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] duffy-60.livejournal.com
Do not fuck with a momma lion's cubs!! :-))

Wonderful ficlet, sweetie.

on 2011-12-19 09:31 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] soulmatejunkee.livejournal.com
So true *LOL*
Thanks for reading.

on 2011-12-19 10:29 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] sfscarlet.livejournal.com
very powerful words- excellent

on 2011-12-20 07:23 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] soulmatejunkee.livejournal.com
Thank you.

on 2011-12-19 11:15 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] pam81.livejournal.com
Way to go Jennifer! Such a powerful piece my dear!
You did a wonderful job, thanks for sharing.

on 2011-12-20 07:23 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] soulmatejunkee.livejournal.com
Thank you Pammy :)

on 2011-12-20 11:25 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] mitakay.livejournal.com
great piece- YOU GO, Jenn!!!

on 2011-12-20 11:57 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] soulmatejunkee.livejournal.com
Thanks a lot :)

on 2011-12-21 03:24 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] manueladb.livejournal.com
I wish she had really done something like that, Craig surely deserved it.

on 2011-12-21 03:36 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] soulmatejunkee.livejournal.com
For sure :)

on 2011-12-25 04:19 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] denvercatmom.livejournal.com
Great story! I always love strong/protective/angry Jen stories. All too often, the series wrote her character as such a wuss and I always thought the writers could have done so much more with her character. But then, look what they did with the last season. Thank God for fanfiction!

Anyway, thanks for the STRONG Jen story and Happy Holidays!

on 2011-12-26 09:50 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] soulmatejunkee.livejournal.com
I would've loved to see Jen talking (or whatever) to Craig after what he did to Justin in Season 3 and 5. But unfortunately ... and so we have to go back to writing.

Thanks for reading.
Happy Holidays for you, too.

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