soulmatejunkee: (BriTin)
Steffi ([personal profile] soulmatejunkee) wrote2010-10-05 12:28 pm

In Between, Part 8 (Cancer-Fic)

Title: In Between, Part 8/?
Author: [livejournal.com profile] soulmatejunkee 
Fandom: Queer as Folk US
Pairing: Brian/Justin
Timeline: What happened between episode 4.09 and 4.10 (POV’s). It starts right after "Eat some fucking chicken soup". 
Word Count: 400 words (drabbles)
Summary: I am writing on it since weeks, so I just thought, maybe I should start posting it
Disclaimer: I don’t own anything. It’s all CowLip and Showtime.
A/N: Beta by [livejournal.com profile] qafkinnetic   (Thanks a lot!)
Every comment is welcome. Let me know what you think. Thanks!

Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4 | Part 5 | Part 6 | Part 7


Justin's POV

1)
Being with Brian was always complicated, but being with a sick Brian was unbelievably annoying, especially when you’re not allowed to act on that annoyance, because he’s sick, and we’re not talking about a cold or a flu.

He was even more stubborn than he already was when circumstances were normal. First it was about the showering, then about being toweled off – which he let me do in the end because I told him that I would not change the sheets again just because he’s to fucking stubborn or proud or what the fuck ever to let me help him.

2)
Then it was about switching sides on bed, so that he could sleep closer to the bathroom – which he finally agreed, especially since normally he’s always sleeping on the bathside anyway. In the end I realized he just argued because it was the only kind of control he still had.

An hour later I finally had him showered and dried back in bed. The chicken soup had stayed inside him and Michael had brought some ginger ale while Brian was sleeping in the afternoon. He seemed to be relieved when I told him that I was back. I’m still pissed.

3)
Brian was not only not a morning person, he was a moody person no matter what time he woke up.

I put the trashcan beside the bed again, crawled up beside him, put us both under the duvet and looked at him. He still looked tired. "You won’t make it so hard for me the whole time, will you?“

"I didn’t ask you to be here.“ He didn’t look at me anymore.

"Do you want to me to leave?“ I asked him seriously, no sad emotion. This had to stop, he had to give in, he had to trust me.

4)
Then he looked at me again and I had problems to keep the serious look up, because there was so much pain in his eyes, but I sustained.

"No“, he whispered and closed his eyes briefly. I knew it was difficult for him to admit that he wanted me to stay, because for him it meant admitting that he needed me. And Brian Kinney doesn’t do needing.

"Good“, I answered. "Not that I would’ve left.“

"You tricked me.“

"I told you, I’ll do what’s best for you.“

He still looked at me and the angst in his eyes was back.


TBC

[identity profile] ls1966.livejournal.com 2010-10-05 11:03 am (UTC)(link)
I really enjoy reading this story, great update!
Looking forward to the next.

*hugs*

[identity profile] soulmatejunkee.livejournal.com 2010-10-05 11:25 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot :-)

[identity profile] pam81.livejournal.com 2010-10-05 11:05 am (UTC)(link)
Amazing. Not only you write Brian so well, but Justin too.
I've loved this POV.
And this line "he just argued because it was the only kind of control he still had" is perfect and so true.
So glad to see that Brian has finally realized he needs and wants Justin with him in this moment.

[identity profile] soulmatejunkee.livejournal.com 2010-10-05 11:26 am (UTC)(link)
That is a nice compliment.
Thank you.
For some reason I always thought it would be difficult to write Brian in character, but the truth is, it's much harder with Justin...

[identity profile] manueladb.livejournal.com 2010-10-05 12:24 pm (UTC)(link)
I really liked this part. I'm glad Brian finally admitted he wants Justin to stay. And Justin was smart once again, knowing he needed to ask and make Brian admit it.

[identity profile] soulmatejunkee.livejournal.com 2010-10-05 12:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Manu, you're back on this :-)
Thanks a lot for your comment.
I'm glad, you liked it.

[identity profile] sexy-pumpkin.livejournal.com 2010-10-05 12:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Wonderful update.

I loved it, even if it's hard to read,,about time Justin took control, I bet he's hard yakka (thats a true Aussie saying lol) you gotta give Justin lots of Brownie points (I think thats another Aussie saying to) later off to bed,,Jx

[identity profile] soulmatejunkee.livejournal.com 2010-10-05 12:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Justin can have everything he wants from me *LOOL*
I am a full hearted Justin-Girl!

[identity profile] guavejuice.livejournal.com 2010-10-05 02:16 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks for the new chapter,Steffi.
you write both Brian and Justin so well.
I love both pov's.
and Brian obviously needed (and wanted) Justin to stay...

[identity profile] soulmatejunkee.livejournal.com 2010-10-05 05:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks Vered.
Brian always want and needs Justin.

[identity profile] sjmpets.livejournal.com 2010-10-05 02:57 pm (UTC)(link)
taking control of the situation just needed to be done. at least now brian knows justin won't be leaving again no matter what.

[identity profile] soulmatejunkee.livejournal.com 2010-10-05 05:26 pm (UTC)(link)
He might know it, but will he believe it?

Thanks for your comment it.

[identity profile] spike7451.livejournal.com 2010-10-05 04:43 pm (UTC)(link)
You capture them both so very well. Excellent update.

[identity profile] soulmatejunkee.livejournal.com 2010-10-05 05:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot :)

[identity profile] wouldbedorothy.livejournal.com 2010-10-05 06:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Good updates! And I really liked in Part 7 how Justin's hair was long when he was kissing another guy in Brian's dream, very smart. 'Cause as much as I think Brian loved the long hair, it was also kind of Justin's "Ethan hair."

[identity profile] soulmatejunkee.livejournal.com 2010-10-05 07:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Interesting POV, but Ethan or no Ethan, I Adored Justins long hair sooo much...

I haven't thought about Ethan while writing it *gg*

Thanks for your comment.

[identity profile] ligiaelena.livejournal.com 2010-10-05 08:59 pm (UTC)(link)
I enjoy every update very much. They are Brian & Justin.
:)

[identity profile] soulmatejunkee.livejournal.com 2010-10-06 06:08 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you :)
Happy to read that you enjoy it.
ext_152815: (Toppy Justin)

[identity profile] trintiff.livejournal.com 2010-10-06 05:05 am (UTC)(link)
I've been reading every angst filled chapter and hurting and loving every one! Sorry I haven't commented yet (I don't think I have anyway.) I'm in grad-school and my parents are old people and I have a teenage boy ... well that about says it I guess about why I don't have time to comment much! I usually read these at night, like a little secret place I can go to watch their love and struggles and realize I'm not the only one! :-)

Every chapter is more beautiful than the next!

Hugs, Cindy

[identity profile] soulmatejunkee.livejournal.com 2010-10-06 06:09 am (UTC)(link)
Happy to be a part of your little secret place.
Thanks for your comment, Cindy. *hugback*