I strarted to read the first half of this chapter this morning ,before I left for work,and just rushed in here to finish it,after I've been thinking about it all day *sigh* it is an amazing chapter,Steffi.you're a true master of BJ dialogs and inner dialogs.your Brian and Justin sound so natural,so real,so...them.I know how much work you put into it to make it look so honest,and I thank you so much for that. I have to say there were a few points during that chapter when I thought,omg,guys,will you stop over thinking everything? but than I figured out that that's what being in a relationship means for them.to feel safe enough to be asking questions,and share your doubts and fears with your partner. I love how Justin feels about the house,it reminds me of what we talked about on the QaF board a while ago ;) and I love the way they used the rings,of course *sighs* oh,well,can't wait to see what comes next (but I won't call you evil,my dear...) warm hugs your devoted fan V.
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on 2011-02-08 02:48 pm (UTC)it is an amazing chapter,Steffi.you're a true master of BJ dialogs and inner dialogs.your Brian and Justin sound so natural,so real,so...them.I know how much work you put into it to make it look so honest,and I thank you so much for that.
I have to say there were a few points during that chapter when I thought,omg,guys,will you stop over thinking everything? but than I figured out that that's what being in a relationship means for them.to feel safe enough to be asking questions,and share your doubts and fears with your partner.
I love how Justin feels about the house,it reminds me of what we talked about on the QaF board a while ago ;)
and I love the way they used the rings,of course *sighs*
oh,well,can't wait to see what comes next (but I won't call you evil,my dear...)
warm hugs
your devoted fan
V.