Bad Daddy!

on 2011-01-14 03:10 pm (UTC)
NEVER, NEVER, NEVER drive in a car with a small child unless the child is in a safety seat, or with an older child unless the child is secured with a seatbelt. Brian riding with Gus in his lap? No. And don't say that Brian and Gus were in the same seatbelt, because that wouldn't be safe for Gus in an accident. Given that canon-Brian always wears his own seatbelt--and makes sure that his passengers wear theirs, I'm sure he'd know that.

Other than that, I'm enjoying your series. But you might want to have a beta look over this chapter for spelling mistakes. They kept tripping me up in my enjoyment of reading this.
This account has disabled anonymous posting.
If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting

Profile

soulmatejunkee: (Default)
Steffi

January 2017

S M T W T F S
1234567
89 1011121314
15161718192021
22232425262728
293031    

Most Popular Tags

Style Credit

Expand Cut Tags

No cut tags
Page generated Jun. 11th, 2025 05:44 pm
Powered by Dreamwidth Studios