I just drawn myself in reading the whole fan-fic, & let me say it's fucking astonishing! My best compliments! First: the way to set POVs (especially Justin & Brian ones) make the story so much attractive. You respected the very own single character of the show, and plus... you developed them as well in a manner I like and someway I expected: Brian being even more in love with Justin and losing little by little his fears and insecurities not to be worth of love by anybody. Justin being more and more assertive for his future but even sweet and comprehensive as always as it's Brian. Now the thing is: Wish I the happy ending now or wish I to read about them more and more and more... and more? The 2nd one obviously. So hurry up! Give us some more! It'd be wonderful to see your shining work on TV like.... uhmmm SEASON 6? Unfortunately I know that's just a dream... SOB!
Just one suggestion: maybe a Craig POV could solve some unsolved matters about his relation with Justin... maybe he could became more sympathetic now after his own failing health... at least he said he thought about it the last six years! I took that for chance.
Thanks for all your great work!