http://conzieu.livejournal.com/ (
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2010-10-20 12:17 am (UTC)
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Very nice.
You might want to change "he fucks me since 10 years"
to "he's been fucking me for ten years", or "he fucks me every night", or "he fucks me all the time", or "he fucks me again and again".
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You might want to change "he fucks me since 10 years"
to "he's been fucking me for ten years", or "he fucks me every night", or "he fucks me all the time", or "he fucks me again and again".